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Steffen Coryi
« on: February 01, 2013, 11:50:43 pm »
Rejected 3/4

Revised version w/ Owned NPC

Full Name:
Steffen Coryi

Species:
Mounty: Technically a Pumard he looks like a cougar

Age:
 18

Type:
student / part time employee

Function:
Lift pilot in training  /  part time employee at Vixen Secret

Quote:
In class: "I got this" *crash*
at work: "This is definitely your color"
in a tight spot: "Somebody, any body? I'm stuck!"
the sliding door: *Panther shreik* "My tail!"

How much experience do you have with role-playing? How much time have you spent on MUSHs/MUXs/etc.?
I refuse to answer!

What is your character's personality?
Fun loving, show off. When at work has been known to act prissy as a joke. A flirt, usually a terrible one.

What things does she/he like?
Hormone filled teen age male (take a wild guess). Swimsuit model posters, piloting lifts, any female with a pulse. The stretchy clothes the females wear in his yoga class. Finding out if he can squeeze into small spaces (like any house cat thats ever drawn breath) Hanging out, doing nothing with friends.

Dislike?
When he gets caught with that serious look on his dace while day dreaming. Getting his tail caught in the sliding door.

What are the strong points of your character?
His physical flexibility. A seemingly endless happy attitude. His feline sneakiness.

Weak points?
Lack of physical strength. Slightly immature (like any guy ever). Inexperience with the adult world. Tendency to get stuck in odd places, due to lack of planning.

Name one thing your character would never do and why.
Explain what it is he day dreams about when he has that serious look on his face.They be private.

How does s/he interact with others?
Cheerful and ready to complement people. Spaces out every so often, but can get back on subject quickly when having a discussion. Females get extra attention, flirting may ensue almost immediately

What are their abilities, hobbies, things they're good at?
Extremely flexible since a kitten, when he discovered the Terran pastime of yoga he began taking classes. Collecting swimsuit model posters. Prowling around, piloting lifts.

MENTION if they carry some sort of weapon.
Natural weaponry: Fangs, retractable claws.

Give an example description of your character.
A hybrid cross between his Cougar father and Leopard mother, he takes after his father. Six foot, two inches tall. Tawny brown coat, darker down his spine and lighter on the underside (typical cougar coloring). Eye color is light greenish grey. While at work he wears a light pink shirt with a name tag and khaki colored pants. While off work he wears what ever. Occasional serious look on his face while staring off into the distance: perverted thoughts.

What qualities or traits does your character have that would be useful to the Mars Academy currently, or in the future when it becomes a colony? This includes skills, and for those that would need to apply, qualifications. Lift pilot, future Ace pilot (if not lynched by angry females before then)

Why does your character want to be at the Academy rather than at another Academy, or some other location?
His older sister works in a nurse in the medical team, he came to mar to be close to some family.

What goals does your character have for the future?
Become a top lift pilot, and have the females throw themselves at him.

What is your characters nature and thoughts on others of his/her species?
His own people have ups and downs. Looking for female close to his height and coat pattern to one day wed. (as with mounty tradition)

What is his or her view on other species?
Some strange looking people (some more than others) among them. According if male or female. Cyantian species are nothing new to him, having grown up on the doorstep of a "tourist attraction" his experiences vary from species to species
Cyantian Humans having been a rarity, and Terran Humans being a completely new subject matter to behold, his experiences are lacking

Please answer the following in a couple paragraphs: What is your character's history? Who is or was your characters family? What were the important events of your characters past? What kind of life did they have before they arrived at the academy?
Grown up in a moderately sized Hall on the southeastern coast, Steffen lived a life of moderate comfort. A mountain top home in the hall, and sub-tropical beaches at the foot of said mountain, made for a paradise of sorts.
The younger of two kittens, Steffen had to endure his older sister and her friends when they were small. Back then females were "disgusting" and "a knot in the tail". Having to endure mounty variations of dress-up, and being Benni's 'peon'so he could tag along left a mark upon him. He learned how to judge female behavior that would signal trouble for him.
As he grew older the sun warmed sands of the local coast line kept his attention, as with any males of any species a certain attraction to females began to take hold. More than once he would come home with a swollen eye, or sand up his nose from an outraged female who had thrashed him for getting a little too close for comfort. His sister would find out what he did, and then she would thrash him. His mother would then get involved and she would scold him. When his father would find out he would give some advice, then ask about details.
When he began the Terran version of "high school" his older sister Benni was already gone off to medical school. This gave him a little more freedom to purse his interests. With out her solid advice to help him, Steffen quickly got into trouble.
Once such incident he was found stuck in a ventilation duct. The official report was he was dared by another student to climb in. In reality his objective was the vent over the females locker room in the gym. Another time he was found packed into a locker in the females locker room. It is still unclear if he crawled in himself, or was packed in by angry female.
After graduating, he decided to become a lift pilot. At a request from their parents, Benni convinced Steffen to enroll at Mars in an attempt to keep an eye on him. Upon reaching Mars, he found himself a position as a cashier in the local Vixen's Secret, much to the dismay of his older sister.

If you're applying for a character that's been at the academy a while, what's happened to them at the academy? How have they spent their time here?
Steffen has been on Mars about a month. Has found a job and is currently having to live with his sister. Hope to find a dorm asap on top of the objective list.

Owned NPC
Older sister of Steffen Coryi

Full Name:
Abeni "Benni" Coryi

Species:
Mounty: Technically a Pumard Looks like Amur Leopard

Age:
25

Type:
Medical Assistant

Function:
Nurse, to give advice to her little brother as needed

Quote:
"its not broken, yet...."

What is your character's personality?
Realistic. Believes what she sees, and what she knows. Tells it like it is.

What things does s/he like?
People who use common sense.

Dislike?
Her brothers antics, from time to  time.

Interaction
She's sweet, and to the point when she speaks.

Give an example description of your character.
Six foot, seven inches tall. Amur leopard coat pattern. Usually found wearing scrubs.

Goals
To treat the wounded, give advice, and be the shoulder sometimes needed to cry on.
« Last Edit: March 04, 2013, 09:48:31 am by daemonschile »
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